He shouldn’t have…

FRIDAY FICTIONEERS

This week’s photo prompt is provided by Roger Bultot.

“Where is she?! She is always here at this time! She never misses her brunch. Her friends are here. Something’s not right.

Is she dead?!

How long should I wait? What if she is never going to come here again! How will I talk to her now? 

Ha! I’ve seen her coming here for past 2 months, I should’ve approached her by now. I guess its too late for that.”

He left his food unfinished and started to get up when she came. He decided it is time.

HE – “Hi”

SHE – “Can I help you, creepy dude?”

……..

HE – “No, I’m sorry.”


(100 words)

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24 thoughts on “He shouldn’t have…

  1. Dear Shivampt,

    Poor guy. His shyness made him seem like a stalker. I felt kind of sorry for him. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Shivam, shyness, the biggest kill joy, isn’t it? Nicely written.

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  3. I feel sorry for him – at the same time this made me laugh! Should’ve spoken to her a lot sooner! 🙂

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  4. Enjoyed this. Makes you wonder how many creeps actually have the best of intentions.

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  5. Good story!

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  6. Oh! I think he might be better off without her if she just calls someone a “creepy dude” without getting to know him.

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  7. Life Lessons of a Dog Lover May 18, 2017 — 9:28 pm

    Oh that was a stab to the gut. Nice take on the prompt.

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  8. Oh dear, that didn’t work out too well. Better luck next time mate!

    Click to read my Friday Fiction

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  9. He waited too long and watched too obviously. You portrayed his thoughts very well.

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  10. I can just imagine so many young boys of my acquaintance being mistaken for ‘creepy dudes’ ! Well crafted.

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  11. Michael B. Fishman May 19, 2017 — 5:56 pm

    I loved this one; best I’ve read yet this week. You captured thoughts that we all have and then the ending . . . the ending that smashed all of his hopes and dreams . . . it left me with a sad smile.

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  12. Evidently, she’s in a league of her own. He needs a new pick-up line.

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  13. Lol. “Is she dead!?”
    Because That’s the only reason why people skip brunch, right? 😀 So adorable.
    It actually feels relatable to me. I lose timing to talk to people too…and end up being super awkward!

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    1. Me too! Being super awkward in many situations is like ma thing😥

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  14. Good one! Very funny☺️

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