Unidentified Shining Object

FRIDAY FICTIONEERS

The rules are simple: Write a story, with a beginning, middle and end, in 100 words or less based on the photo prompt posted every week here. This week’s prompt is provided by Dale Roberson.


It was brighter than they thought it would be when they decided to go out. They stopped to look at the magistic scene, the moon in the clouds was looking beautiful than ever.

Priya held Rajesh’s hand and said, “I’m glad we did this.”

Rajesh was silent.

Priya looked at him and found him standing with his mouth open wide.

“Why are you starting at the moon?”

“That is not a moon.” He turned, “That is.” Priya looked at where he was pointing and found the moon.

The fake moon was now moving fast in their direction, getting bigger.


(99 words)

28 thoughts on “Unidentified Shining Object

  1. supercalifragilisticexpialidocious June 15, 2017 — 5:22 am

    Ooo… Spooky. I wonder what it was called? Flying moon? 😉

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      1. supercalifragilisticexpialidocious June 15, 2017 — 5:37 am

        Or.. safeed aag ka gola. 😉 I don’t know if there is something called safeed aag. Is there ? 😉

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      2. Haha. I didn’t know you knew Hindi! You startled me with that Safeed aag Ka Gola😂😂

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      3. supercalifragilisticexpialidocious June 15, 2017 — 6:15 am

        I am an Indian 😀 haha, don’t tell me you thought I was an alien or something, after all I have a really good name 😉😂

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  2. A nice piece of misdirection there. Well done

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  3. Spooky! The eminent danger of it…. good write!

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  4. Ah yes, the *other* moon is a dead giveaway! I’m guessing the fake moon doesn’t mean them well, either… uh-oh!

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  5. Awesome! Well written. I can’t help wondering what that other light is though. :o)

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    1. Thanks😊 I wrote it by keeping UFO in mind.

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  6. Good one! Run, run, run!

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    1. Thanks😊 I don’t think they’ll make it even if they run😅

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  7. michael1148humphris June 17, 2017 — 10:59 am

    Lovely sci fi mystery, I enjoyed it

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  8. Dear Shivam,

    Perhaps it’s time to run and hide. Well done. I enjoyed this. 😀

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  9. Eeek! This isn’t g oing to end happily ever after, is it?

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  10. Oh dear, this looks ominous. Hope it’s coming in peace

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    1. Michael, I think you are the first person who thought that they could have a peaceful purpose. I don’t know why we always think that alien will most definitely attack us if they come here😅

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  11. Here is a cheeky take:
    I wonder what Priya and Rajesh did? If that’s not a moon – is it the drone that Priya’s father recently purchased and is the talk of the neighbourhood? After all, it was known that Priya’s father did not like her hanging out with Rajesh .

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    1. Wow! You sure know how to make a tale interesting!😀

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